Happiness – A Haiku

Happiness - A haikuHaiku Rules:Β 

An unrhymed Japanese poem recording the essence of a moment. Nature is combined with human nature. It usually consists of three lines of 5/7/5 (5 kana in the first line, 7 kana in the second line, and 5 kana in the third line) totaling seventeen kana.

A foreign adaptation of 1, usually written in three lines totaling 17 syllables or LESS.

Haiku is not written in the past, nor does it cover a long period of time.

Haiku usually contains a season word (called kigo). It is not a requirement, but season words are a big part of haiku.

Personal note: while I ain’t a proΒ at Haiku, I find some Β Haiku’s written devoid of anything to do with seasons or nature. While it may be completely a poet’s liberty and rightly so I personally find Haiku’s with a comparison of nature and human nature beautiful.

 

 

39 Replies to “Happiness – A Haiku”

  1. Hi Dear, I’m really happy to see this post here. Don’t wait….. Open the door…. There are many lovelorn peoples waiting for the knock πŸ˜› πŸ™‚

    Well, regarding Haiku or English language itself, I don’t understand this syllable or kana thing.

    Anyway, Wonderful lines… Truly loved it πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you Ravish, am happy it made you happy for me! I use the chin method to count the syllable (hold your hand a little away from your chin and say the lines every time your chin touches your hand is a syllable πŸ™‚ ) Bottom line you liked it is what matters to the poet πŸ™‚

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  3. A lovely piece! But could I pick your head for a moment, please? As per what my understanding of syllable is, doesn’t this have 6 syllables in the first line, 9 in the second and 8 in the third? An online syllable-counter I googled up also seems to correspond with that. Would love to hear back from you, to clear my confusion. πŸ™‚ And I didn’t know of the chin method of counting, though – thanks for that! πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you, I was not aware of the syllable count by Google, used the hand chin method. Well thank you for your suggestions, I have made the corrections now πŸ™‚ It now fits a perfect Haiku πŸ™‚ Thanks once again.

    2. Thank you, I was not aware of the syllable count by Google, used the hand chin method. Well thank you for your suggestions, I have made the corrections now It now fits a perfect Haiku Thanks once again.

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