नयन तुम्हारे हम पर जादू कर देंगे
न पता था वोही इस तरह ठग लेंगे
हमने सोचा उन बाँध नयन मैं होगी हमारी शरण
पता न था बेघर कर जाएँगे हमें यूँही बेकारण
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
नयन तुम्हारे हम पर जादू कर देंगे
न पता था वोही इस तरह ठग लेंगे
हमने सोचा उन बाँध नयन मैं होगी हमारी शरण
पता न था बेघर कर जाएँगे हमें यूँही बेकारण
Bahut hi sundar rachna… manovegon se oat-prot… hriday ke gahantum tal ko chhu liya hai… Ise sajha karne ke liye aapko tahe dilse dhanyevad 🙂
It reminded me of that song of Omkara “Naina thug lenge”
Now come to song, your voice quality is really good and some modulations are superb. Hope you’ll continue to entertain us with your lovely voice 🙂
The effort is met its purpose with such good appreciation Ravish. Thank you so much for motivating me to record more 🙂 aap itni umda hindi likhte hain pata na tha 🙂
The effort is met its purpose with such good appreciation Ravish. Thank you so much for motivating me to record more aap itni umda hindi likhte hain pata na tha
we want more…keep writing 🙂
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🙂 Thank you Ekta.
Thank you Ekta.
Aaah I saw this on FB :). Nice effort Shweta, would love to see more such from you 🙂
Sure Vinay, more to come.
Sure Vinay, more to come.
Heart Touching and also i liked it..Keep it up Shweta. Waiting for the next.
Thank you Sumit, happy you liked it.
Thank you Sumit, happy you liked it.
Nice one Shweta… 🙂 liked it really… (y)..
Thank you for the sweet comment 🙂
Thank you for the sweet comment
Good one dear. 🙂
Thank you Vinitha 🙂
Thank you Vinitha
Lovely poetry and a beautiful voice ! 🙂
Thank you Renu, am happy you liked it and thank you so much for your continuous support. I truly value it.
Thank you Renu, am happy you liked it and thank you so much for your continuous support. I truly value it.
Wow Shweta, You are an artist….really impressive and beautiful…. gr8 dear….:)
Thank you Priyashi, we all are….you play magic with words and I tried with voice. The admiration is mutual 🙂
Thank you Priyashi, we all are….you play magic with words and I tried with voice. The admiration is mutual
Liked it : )
cant stop humming the song ..
“ye nayan dare dare… ”
beautiful
Glad it got you humming, the song has that magic. Welcome to my site Pavan.
Glad it got you humming, the song has that magic. Welcome to my site Pavan.
Beautiful …. and you like the Nayan ghazal is no surprise… Aap swayam ratan-pitari se deepit nayano ki swamini…. no treasure is more precious than your bright, luminescent emerald-sapphire eyes …..
Aay haay, I would have married you if you and I were available lol You made my moment, day and life with so much praise sweetie. Ping you on FB.
Aay haay, I would have married you if you and I were available lol You made my moment, day and life with so much praise sweetie. Ping you on FB.
what , seriously 😛
Anyways as always it was amazing !
And you took it seriously? hahaha Thank you Rahul for the appreciation 🙂
And you took it seriously? hahaha Thank you Rahul for the appreciation
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Yeh kya tha Rahul…:) 🙂
This is beautiful! You have a lovely, soulful voice. Look forward to more.
Thank you Ami, sure more to come now with so much motivation 🙂
Thank you Ami, sure more to come now with so much motivation
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you Amrit.
Its amazing shweta… 🙂 🙂
Thank you so much for liking it and always voting for me on IB 🙂
Thank you so much for liking it and always voting for me on IB
I always like your post on IB… like you do … 🙂
🙂 yes I do and will always do 🙂
Really awesome Shweta :).
Thank you Aseem, happy you liked it and welcome to my blog.
Thank you Aseem, happy you liked it and welcome to my blog.
Hello Shweta, you are blessed with poetic flair. I dropped in here to thank you for reading our blog and giving your votes. They mean a lot for me. Best wishes from Bangalore.
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Nice one. crispy
thank you so much 🙂