Aas – A zealous hope

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After long a poem and a recording together 🙂 This is my last post for A-Z Challenge on Zealous…..love…It was a wonderful journey to write everyday, a challenge indeed for a writer like me who is not used to so much content published daily. Hope you enjoyed it as much as I did 🙂

45 Replies to “Aas – A zealous hope”

  1. Very beautiful poem. It seems like Meera’s poem who was waiting for her beloved. And your voice put life to intact emotions. Superb! 🙂

  2. Hi Shweta
    Beautiful poem decored by soothing voice of urs ..deeply touched ..ur voice gives life to words ..you are a wonderful writer ….
    Thanks for sharing 🙂

    1. Thank you, I just mentioned to Maniparna that its incomplete till the time I hear from my besties…glad to have you around 🙂 mean it 🙂

  3. I completely enjoyed reading all your posts of the A-Z challenge. You rocked! 🙂
    Amd this poem is extremely heart touching 🙂

    1. And you stood by me through all post rock solid….thats a sign of being super friends, thanks Purba…so happy you liked it 🙂

    1. ohhh thank you so much Maniparna, so happy you loved it…you know it is so incomplete till the time I get views from my besties you, Kokila and Somali 🙂 hugs babe!!

  4. Such a beautiful way to wrap A-Z Ananya. The month was awesome and I was lazy 😀 And it’s really been a while since you recorded. The hope, wait, and pure love couldn’t be depicted in a better way! 🙂 Eloquent and beautiful j. The magic’s back! 🙂

    1. I like the sound of the magic’s back Shashank, it was super pleasure to write A-Z with you my first collaboration on writing 🙂 Well i was missing poetry so the try, so happy you liked it 🙂

  5. Beautiful one Shweta, although I can’t reach much of Hindi, it was really nice listening to the audio. Very beautiful selection of words and depth to them to bring out the emotions..

    1. its so sweet of you Vinay to have tried to make sense of the poem, thank you so much…ill try to translate inEnglish the next time.

  6. you have such a beautiful voice Shweta…..it added such charm to the magical words you have weaved here……:)

  7. Too good. Loved the poem but more than that how you started it. I wonder, do the relationships that are for benefits are actual? We should give them some other name. A friend for benefit, doesn’t qualify to be one. Enjoyed listening to you, you should record more often. And this time it was clearer than earlier ones.

    1. Wow thank you Saru, so happy you liked it…agree that relationships with conditions or vested interest aren’t relationships….but I see them all around these days, its a sad state. Happy you liked it, will record more!!

  8. all good things come to an end….but I sincerely hope that you continue writing….it has been a pleasure reading ur posts

    1. Shukriya Cifar Shayar…alternative career ready hai RJ ka ab toh 🙂 Bohot shukriya ki aapko kavita aur recording achhi lagi 🙂

  9. वाह। कविता में भावनाओं का सैलाब सा है। आपकी आवाज़ बड़ी खूबसूरत है। मन अभी भी कहीं खोया है आपकी आवाज़ में इस कविता को सुनकर.. पहले वापिस अपने आप में लौटूँ तो ही कुछ टिप्पणी दे सकूँ। 🙂

    1. Shukriya Namrata, aapki sarahna ne moh liya mujhe 🙂 bohut shukriya recording ko itna pasand karne ke liye!

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