Pearls of perspiration travel down your brow onto my shoulders
Like the dew drops trickle on a rose petal
धीरे धीरे …….मद्धम मद्धम
Image Source: Flickr
Note: Have taken a little leeway from the rules of a Haiku 🙂
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
Pearls of perspiration travel down your brow onto my shoulders
Like the dew drops trickle on a rose petal
धीरे धीरे …….मद्धम मद्धम
Image Source: Flickr
Note: Have taken a little leeway from the rules of a Haiku 🙂
Nice…
Thank you Alok.
Hello Shweta
Wow, short but lovely lines .. thanks for sharing
And welcome Back 🙂
Have a wonderful day Ahead
Thank you Bhavikkji, tamara sneh ane utsaah mate 🙂
Shweta, You have described the sensual love very beautifully and elegantly. It reminded me of Geet Govind where role of perspiration in love game was superbly described. Superb Dear 🙂
Thank you Ravish, for appreciating me.
Do lafzon ki kahani, dilkash andaaz! Kya baat hai.
Shukriya Shabab, meri site pe aapka swagat hai.
Good work – Keep it up. 🙂
Thank you Chirag.
I like the use of English & Hindi!
Nice innovation, Soul-sis 🙂
Thank you Soul-sis, Hope you had a great Diwali 🙂
So much expressed in so little words. Beautiful and Elegant, Shweta! 🙂
Thank you Vinitha, happy you liked it.
Beautiful..
Thank you Gowtham.
Waw., This one is quite impressive snap.
The lines are very nice too. Liked it very much.
Thank you Ashish, really happy you liked it 🙂
A charming mix of languages.
Thank you Tomichan 🙂
Wonderful..gagar me sagar….!
Shukriya VP 🙂
Innovative and beautiful … loved it dear 🙂
Hey Babe, thank you as always….happy happy you liked it.
Though I am not very fluent in Hindi, I loved the last line.. It kinda reminds me of a song. Not able to place it very well, but it does add a lot of intensity 🙂
Thank you Vinay, the last line added the required intensity 🙂
Good one Shweta.
Thanks Indrani
Lovely dear….!!!
Thank you Bhavani.
The rules are meant to be broken 🙂 I loved the cocktail you have made 🙂
Hey Ankush, thank you so much. Really happy you liked it.
Very descriptive- short and sensual Shweta….
Thanks Sunaina, glad you liked it.
Arrey waah … that Hindi line made it all the more beautiful 🙂
Thank you Amrit, happy you liked it.
Short and seductive ! Cool , I liked it !
Thank you Rahul.
Beautiful Lines
Thank you Kirti.
Wow,what a depiction. Well said.