मुतज़ाद – The opposites

Fire

 

 

मुतज़ाद

 

ख्वाइशों की बिजलियाँ

गरजी बिस्तर पे

तन्हाइयों का शोर कातिलाना रहा

 

मौसम बदले

साथ करवटें भी

        इस प्यास को बुझाने का सलीक़ा न मिला

 

अर्श – ए – ज़िम उम्मीद छोड़

ताब रखा कमज़ोर सिकुड़ती तपिश पे

ताक़त रुबा , ताज़ा – ए – शिरीन , नाब वही एक सहारा निकला

 

मुतज़ाद – Opposites, सलीक़ा – proper way, अर्श – ए – ज़िम – highest (seventh) sky, ताब – patience, ताक़त रुबा – that which saps/drains the strength,  ताज़ा – ए – शिरीन – fresh and sweet, नाब – unadulterated

An innovative concept brought in by my blogger friend Ravish where he challenged us few bloggers to write on a audio prompt. Tried my hand at the challenge 🙂

Image source: Giphy

Happy Birthday Bestie!!

Today is my Bestie, Kokila Gupta’s birthday!! And staying so far away all I can do is wish her our way, we bloggers just know to write isn’t it? So heres wishing her a super happy birthday!!

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I have written a Cinquain for her 🙂

Bestie!

We chatter loads

She protects n shadows

Sunshine and happiness galore

Lifeline

Wish you a super duper birthday!!

Visit my first attempt at Cinquain here. Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey. Another form, sometimes used by school teachers to teach grammar, is as follows:

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

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Kokila and me
Kokila and me

Pal – A Tanka Poem

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Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7). While I would love to attempt this in English as well, however my first attempt is in Hindi 🙂

 

Skyline – A Cinquain poem (FPFS – Day 2)

skyline

 

 

Buildings

Tall skyscrapers

Staring eyes of bulbs

Witness moments busy happy and sad

Yet silent

December 2014 was on a month long holiday in Asia. that’s where the Singapore Skyline is clicked 🙂 Tried my hand again at a Cinquain 🙂 Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey. Another form of Cinquain is as under.

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

I have been tagged by my bestie, my babe Kokila to take part in Five photos Five stories Challenge (FPFS) which is- Post a picture for 5 consecutive days and attach a post to it , fiction, poem or short write-up.It can be anything to suit your taste.
I am tagging my dear blogger friend Alok Singhal on my Day two and as a part of the challenge, I will tag a new person on Day Three.

I Opened My Eyes (FPFS – Day 1)

Sleeping-girl

 

poem

This form of poetry is called Rondeau. My first attempt at writing one. A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short – a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the same metrical length).

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I have been tagged by my bestie, my babe Kokila to take part in Five photos Five stories Challenge (FPFS) which is- Post a picture for 5 consecutive days and attach a post to it , fiction, poem or short write-up.It can be anything to suit your taste. Thank you so so much babe for tagging me 🙂
I am tagging my dear blogger friend Vishal on my Day One and as a part of the challenge, I will tag a new person on Day Two.

 

Autumn of Thoughts

A Poem on something that never leave us, Thoughts. Happy, sad, nostalgic, romantic, worrisome…that is when the heart tells the mind, wither away o thoughts like Autumn leaves.

Autumn of Thoughts

 

Mind Clutter – a Haiku

Haiku

Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).

Almari se Dil

almari se dil

कुछ रचनाओं का अंग्रेजी मे भावार्थ मुम्किन नहीं हो पता।  Am really sorry friends as this time I did not create an English version as it would be unjust to the words written in Hindi.