Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).
So well written Haiku Ananya 🙂 It captures the cluttered mind through day in and out, through diurnal struggles and yet the dilemma remains as they heart’s helpless or so I think 😀 I like this lil guy you have put up 🙂 (P.S. see.. me not writing has benefits too.. 😉 )
I am not letting you go away without putting that Haiku on this guy on your blog, get that! and you know how much I fret to write a Haiku Shashank, so super happy that a guy who writes awesome Haikus himself says this. Rightly said we get busy with tasks and then realize all the clutter (read mess for you) we land up in 🙂
Beautiful Haiku. I am completely moved and lost 😉
Thank you Gawthama, now being lost makes the two of you, the kid and you 🙂
Exactly! Very subtle… Loved it 😉
Nice, interesting, and the pic is interesting too. 🙂
Thank you Somali, happy you liked it 🙂
Lovely Shweta! The pic is super cute 🙂
haina Archana…..well i worked on on create the pic…but I too drooled on the outcome 🙂 waise Shweta is lovely…I agree hehe!
Lovely girls have lovely friends, my lovely 😉 muaah
Clutter for sure!
Loved the cartoon with all the colourful wiring in the brain!
Thank you Sunita, i am feeling happy you enjoyed the cartoon as well.
awesome lines. nice choice of pic 🙂
Thank you, happy you liked the pic!
hmm now also tell us how to de-clutter 🙂
hehe… It resonates well with the work load & overtime pressure. Great Haiku, Shweta 🙂
Hectic times for sure Ravish 🙂 and thank you!
Unfortunately true. There’s so much clutter in the mind as well as around everybody. De-Cluttering is the only solution.
Tough times in ones life 🙂
I second your thought Shweta…. 🙂 The picture is eye catching and your haiku is complementing it…. 🙂
Thanks Arpita, happy you liked it 🙂
That presentation adds to the essence of the words. Superb choice of words to punch the effect in 17 syllables.
Well, Haiku has never been my core competence just a humble try Aditya, happy you liked it 🙂
I can identify with this! We all can, Soul-sis 🙂
Love the cute pic!
Thanks Soul-sis, yeh so agree with so much going around all of us with no time to unwind this is a state sometimes 🙂
You have guessed the state of my mind so well dear girl ! And the image is of which, nowadays, my dreams are made up of …
Nicely written and well expressed girl .Kudos for this one 🙂
Thank you babe, first flight leke aa jaaun? A coffee or two and loads of gupshup will entangle for sure 🙂 waise for starters call banta hai 🙂 Thank you babe, happy happy you liked it 🙂
Yes, that’s my state of mind for now…. tangled…..
Ah…I suggest travel is therapeutic 🙂
Yes it is. Unfortunately work comes in the way…. but i’m sure to travel soon…
Beautiful dearie…just the perfect words for describing the tangled vibes of a cluttered mind… (y)
Thank you Mani, I think twice writing a Haiku and when such sweet words come from Haiku queen, I can’t be happier 🙂 the powerpuff girls poem is pending, will write it soon!
This is quite profound. Love your prestentation dear. 🙂
Thanks Saru, happy you liked the pic and the Haiku 🙂
quite a uncluttered Haiku… kudos.
hahah thank you Sathish kumar 🙂
Fantastic write…thanks for sharing