All the most powerful emotions come from chaos -fear,anger,love- especially love. Love is chaos itself. Think about it! Love makes no sense. It shakes you up and spins you around. And then, eventually , it falls apart.
Aapko miss karna roz ki bat ho gai,
yaad karna aadat ki bat ho gai,
apase dur rahena kismat ki bat ho gai,
magar aapko bhulna
apne bas k bahar ki baat ho gai!
True Green Speck. Bhai yeh to sawadah leta hain samshir chala ke ,en ka dard se koi talluk nahi hota sabdhon ka jadoo jala kar zakhmo per namak chidakte hain.jaane kitna qatal kiye phirta hain.ab mujhe bhi protection lane padagi
I believe Love, the abstract feeling is inherently beautiful. It’s human that has the power to make this feeling look ugly or beautiful by the way they gift wrap this present, called Love. I am sure the protagonist will meet a better human who will gift wrap this feeling well.
It’s sad, but isn’t it true? Love isn’t all its touted to be. Deceit, pain and hurt. That’s all it boils down to be. Still we run after that. And, we call ourselves the most intelligent creatures in the universe!
Whatever, love towards a person is essentially taking care of the person well within the limits set by the System around with no limit for sacrifice from myself.. I can, forever keep this reference and try work accordingly correcting myself alone as much as possible where I being a mortal am sure to err.. You brought out a real Thought for the Day, Shweta!
Well, people usually call love o be painful. But is it really true? Most often if we look close it’s not the love that’s painful. It’s either not getting the love back, or misunderstandings between lovers, fight between them, not enough love and other problems which are painful. When it’s love, it is beautiful.
Nice poem! Written beautifully…
Terrific!
My heart and soul are with this poem and for this poem, Shweta!
But my humble submission is that the word ‘again’ is superfluous in the last line…hope no explanations required..!
(And no, I am by no means, suggesting you to alter your lovely poem…it is barely a curious reader’s observation:))
No pain no gain Shweta; perhaps love too has to go through the churn but cherish this feeling too as it teaches you a lesson or two while bidding goodbye.
You’ll feel love, again, in it’s true form..divine and beautiful. We all have perhaps seen this ugly face of love…sometime, somewhere…
Beautiful one, bestie… <3
Love is nothing but Attention, Sacrifice, patience and what not.. It’s nothing but sticking to the Dharma of ours in this world as envisaged by the Great Seers of the world.. A 100% of this may be a Mirage in our lives but wherever the glimpses of Love are seen, a great Peace prevails all around without an exception.. So nicely penned the Poetry, Shweta.. Sorry for commenting a bit late!
Very touching. Love comes with a package of laughs and tears, desires and heartbreak, hopefulness and betrayal. But we mustn’t ever give up on love. It shows it’s beautiful side when least expected and prevails through all our doubts.
It Is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for what you are not
Golden words from a Pure soul and mind
Golden word from golden soul and mind Never run from reality
Beautifully said. Love that’s deceiving is not love at all.
Rightly said Fayaz, it ain’t love at all.
All the most powerful emotions come from chaos -fear,anger,love- especially love. Love is chaos itself. Think about it! Love makes no sense. It shakes you up and spins you around. And then, eventually , it falls apart.
Saans lete hue bhi Darta hu’n
ye na samajhe’n ki aah karta hu’n
Bahar-e-hasti mein hu’n misaal-e-hubaab
mit hi jaata hu’n jab ubharta hu’n
Itni aazaadi bhi ghanimat hai
saans leta hu’n
baat karta hu’n
Sheikh saahab Khuda se Darte ho
main to angrezo’n hi se Darta hu’n
Aap kya poochte hain mera mizaaj
shukr allaah kaa hai marataa hu’n
Ye bada aib mujh mein hai ‘Akbar’
dil mein jo aaye kah guzarta hu’n
Aapko miss karna roz ki bat ho gai,
yaad karna aadat ki bat ho gai,
apase dur rahena kismat ki bat ho gai,
magar aapko bhulna
apne bas k bahar ki baat ho gai!
Love is beautiful, but it can be painful too 🙂
rightly said Amrit.
True Green Speck. Bhai yeh to sawadah leta hain samshir chala ke ,en ka dard se koi talluk nahi hota sabdhon ka jadoo jala kar zakhmo per namak chidakte hain.jaane kitna qatal kiye phirta hain.ab mujhe bhi protection lane padagi
Give and Take, Understanding and good communication are absolutely essential to find true love
luck and destiny too are important to find true love.
dear girl … one line only… That’s deception.(bhram/chalaava)
who knows better Kokila 🙂
I believe Love, the abstract feeling is inherently beautiful. It’s human that has the power to make this feeling look ugly or beautiful by the way they gift wrap this present, called Love. I am sure the protagonist will meet a better human who will gift wrap this feeling well.
cant agree more, love is pure, its only humans who map it to other feelings to make it ugly. its the experience of love I depicted.
Very sad.
It’s sad, but isn’t it true? Love isn’t all its touted to be. Deceit, pain and hurt. That’s all it boils down to be. Still we run after that. And, we call ourselves the most intelligent creatures in the universe!
Irony! 🙁
Two sides of a coin 🙂
Well expressed.
Whatever, love towards a person is essentially taking care of the person well within the limits set by the System around with no limit for sacrifice from myself.. I can, forever keep this reference and try work accordingly correcting myself alone as much as possible where I being a mortal am sure to err.. You brought out a real Thought for the Day, Shweta!
Beautiful poetry…
Well, people usually call love o be painful. But is it really true? Most often if we look close it’s not the love that’s painful. It’s either not getting the love back, or misunderstandings between lovers, fight between them, not enough love and other problems which are painful. When it’s love, it is beautiful.
Nice poem! Written beautifully…
Very poignant. Beautifully penned dear. 🙂
Terrific!
My heart and soul are with this poem and for this poem, Shweta!
But my humble submission is that the word ‘again’ is superfluous in the last line…hope no explanations required..!
(And no, I am by no means, suggesting you to alter your lovely poem…it is barely a curious reader’s observation:))
Awesome!
lovely poem…the entire meaning changes with that ‘again’
the cycle of love repeat itself, beautifully penned and presented
No pain no gain Shweta; perhaps love too has to go through the churn but cherish this feeling too as it teaches you a lesson or two while bidding goodbye.
Beautifully expressed 🙂
till I meet love again, to know what it means to love and deceive…
We all feel wait for that happy shade of love. Beautiful poem, sounds very authentic.
Love will feel beautiful.. when it is real.. wonderful poetry, Shweta..
oh dear! I see this is an old post. What are your thoughts now, this January?
You’ll feel love, again, in it’s true form..divine and beautiful. We all have perhaps seen this ugly face of love…sometime, somewhere…
Beautiful one, bestie… <3
The hope to feel it again, the anticipation, the desire, is the beauty of it all ! 🙂
Your Articles are always heart touching and very insightful.Thank you for sharing.
beautifully penned.. i have felt this way at times
Love has many faces, doesn’t it? (And many phases to, I guess. :))
Nicely written, Shweta.
Happy 2016.
Here’s wishing you lots of (enchanting) love this year. 🙂
Love is nothing but Attention, Sacrifice, patience and what not.. It’s nothing but sticking to the Dharma of ours in this world as envisaged by the Great Seers of the world.. A 100% of this may be a Mirage in our lives but wherever the glimpses of Love are seen, a great Peace prevails all around without an exception.. So nicely penned the Poetry, Shweta.. Sorry for commenting a bit late!
Very touching. Love comes with a package of laughs and tears, desires and heartbreak, hopefulness and betrayal. But we mustn’t ever give up on love. It shows it’s beautiful side when least expected and prevails through all our doubts.
Happy 2016 to you dearie 🙂