I wrote this to write a journey but the words just got created and when the poem ended it got me more peace than what I intended to pen. A poet or writer does feel that peace after a creation. This is dedicated to all writers and poets in search.
A special mention is that I penned a guest post at Shashank’s blog, it’s my blogging journey. Something very special and dear to me, you can read it here.
I know and feel the calmness u r talking about and it’s evident in the poems. Ananya, the journey, the destiny ЁЯЩВ I love how you’ve so beautifully penned down the flow in both.. and thanks for such a sweet special guest post and mention ЁЯЩВ
Ill start with the best first, the guest post super special to me! yes Shashank, when mind is at peace its calm. Thank you so much for such wonderful words, well i thought you get really silent sometimes AMS ЁЯЩВ
You present it so beautifully ! Its always a great reading experience when one lands on your page.
Thats super appreciation, thank you Aditya you always are so nice to me! value it a lot.
Beautifully Penned !
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Beautiful as always,
I m not a writer (I wish I could write down my thoughts) but have started understanding the thought of writers ЁЯЩВ
Thanks for sharing ЁЯЩВ
Keep Smiling ЁЯЩВ
You are a writer Bhavikk and yes you have a blog. Koi modesty nai ahiyan. And you should write, try definitely amazing thashe! Thank you for liking it!
Beautiful … has that certain transcendental feel ….ethereal .. just like you ЁЯЩВ
maybe only I felt that ..but I loved it even better for the life and bliss in it ..the emotional side of it .:) …
Emo and me, i think emo is synonym ЁЯЩВ and regarding may be only I felt wali line, is because you know me babe! Miss ya…will call you soon! aur haan thanks toh kaha hi nahi…waise i know you know i thank you for a lot of things
Best thanks from you is when you post a new soulful verse .. loved your latest thoughts one a tad too much … wishes n wishes ЁЯЩВ
You have conveyed the sentiments beautifully in both languages. Loved reading.
Thank you Somali, this coming from you is like wow, thanks a lot!
No words… Just bow my head ЁЯЩВ
Wo….Ravish, made my day!!
After a long and cumbersome journey I’m sure getting to the destination gives you a whole lot of satisfaction and some kind of peace. ЁЯЩВ
Absolutely, just a depiction of a state after a glimpse of HIS.
yes i read that post and commented too ЁЯЩВ
and coming to this poem AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ЁЯЩВ
Thank you Bikram…you should not vanish from blogging scene now on !
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рдмрд╣реБрдд рд╢реБрдХреНрд░рд┐рдпрд╛ рд╡рд┐рд╢рд╛рд▓. рдЗрддрдиреА рдЕрдЪреНрдЫреА рдкреНрд░рд╢рдВрд╕рд╛ рдкрдврд╝рдХрд░ рдорди рдЦреБрд╢ рд╣реЛ рдЧрдпрд╛ ЁЯЩВ
I always love your poems Shweta ЁЯЩВ I think the emotions are well penned in both… ЁЯЩВ I wish to write such lovely poems too.
Why not try writing one Arpita, there is always a first time isn’t it. I am confident you’d write better than me ЁЯЩВ
What a beautiful portrayal of life through the sinews to the End! Loved it.
Thank you sooo much ЁЯЩВ
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рдмрд╣реБрдд рд╢реБрдХреНрд░рд┐рдпрд╛ рдпреЛрдЧреАрдЬреА
Very touching & true.
We all have to journey through life & see through many masks.
nice when we meet friends & ultimately the Lord will receive us…
Nice words, Soul-sis ЁЯЩВ
Thanks Soul-sis, so truly said ЁЯЩВ
Beautiful
Thank You Rupam ЁЯЩВ
True, Life has many masks, some worn and some remain veiled yet….no words for your words. I love to read thoughts in Hindi, and I am still reeling in these words. woven on silken threads…few precious pearls…
Thanks Datta, your comment itself if a beautiful poetry. Felt my words reached the way I wanted to convey them ЁЯЩВ
Nicely crafted words and emotions Shweta
Thanks Twinkle, happy you liked it.
Beautiful lines
Thank you Ronita.
Hi Shweta,
My first visit to your blog,
Its awesome and I love your piece. So emotional and so clean.
Beautiful lines. ЁЯЩВ
Hello Swadhin, welcome to my site. Thank you for such sweet appreciation. Glad you liked it.
For the first time i have seen some not-so-common words used in a poem, and i liked it…touching lines.
Thank you Alok, am happy like really happy you liked it.
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Totally loved it. Emotional feed for the day ЁЯЩВ
Thanks Shweta
khoob…bahut khoob
Shukriya Ashwini ЁЯЩВ
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NIce one Shweta
Nicely penned poem Shweta. Talaash to hamesha hothi rahti hai bas manzilen alag alag hothi hain.
B’ful
Nice one
nice
Dear, Sweta
I was going through your poetic piece’s, and found them quite exclusive. Well all I can say is you write very good.
I’m an aspiring new blogger, and it so happen that I also write some poems, I have a blog of mine @ http://starlitoctave.wordpress.com . I would be glad if you can give me some tips on how to be better writer.
Thank you
Sam
Very beautifully penned Shweta. ‘Yah daastan nahi aasan’ bus apene likha aur hum beh chale. ЁЯЩВ
That is really sweet !
the precious line….”traded through betrayal…”
Superb…!
I feel its very hard to give language to our feelings. You’ve successfully given it two languages!! beautiful
wow very wonderful poem presented beautifully very touching lines
Marvelous Poem. You have done a wonderful Job shweta writing it in both languages. I think many may relate to these lines : on course many a mask I met, veiled, exposed…
Lovely Lines ! Congratulations on writing such a piece. xx
Arohii
bahut sundar
Beautiful….!!
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Nice Poen Loved It
Regards
Ammar
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