Listen………..Ya say
Let me in, if you may
No you cause pain
I promise I wont, it will be your gain
Door opens, they  hug, fight ends, happy end of day!
This is my first try at the Limerick poetry form. Hope you enjoy it!
A notable Limerick – which won an Irish ‘Listowel Writers Week’ prize in 1998 – exemplifies the structure:
Writing a Limerick’s absurd,
Line one and line five rhyme in word,
And just as you’ve reckoned
They rhyme with the second;
The fourth line must rhyme with the third.Image Source: Pinterest
More on Limerick: Here
Happy end of day! Keep the momentum up 🙂
Yes, you observed it right, really want to keep the momentum on for happy writings now. The Hiri effect you see.
HirI effect. .. lol!
I miss u! Our long coffee talks. .. or just walks 😉
Coming soon….this December..watch out babe.
He he, nice one Shweta, clever limerick 🙂
Thank you Thank you …Vinay.
Hi Shweta,the poetry is small but penetrating.
Thank you Vijai, this form of poetry is 5 lines 🙂 happy you liked it.
Great job, Soul-sis! Now inspired by you!
I wanna attempt a Limerick too 🙂
Thank you soul-sis, I will eagerly wait for your attempt at it now! Am sure it will be wonderful.
I realize that I have written several limericks before!
5 sentence poems with such rhymes 🙂
I love the fun limericks of Edward Lear. We had them in school in our English-Reader.
So now I got to read all of them and am super sure it would be wonderful.
Here’s my latest Limerick!
http://www.anitaexplorer.com/2014/10/cyclone-hudhud.html
Do read! Mentioned you in my post 🙂
I read it, very nice soul-sis. You will improve my SEO ranking wow. Thanks so much for the mention.
1I dont know why I liked this 😛
You liked it is what counts Rahul and am happy you liked it.
Wonderful verses Swetha 🙂
Thank you Nagini.
The eternal fights of the lovers….well penned…could relate to it…loved it
Thank you Datta 🙂
Nice Shweta. I like that you keep trying new forms of writing and you do it very well.
Thank you Meenal, your observation and appreciation is great motivation.
Interesting Poem!
Thank you Uppalji.
Such a nice lines Shweta…. Lovely…:)
Thank you Priyashi, glad you liked it.
Nice…loved reading it!
Thank you Rajeev and welcome to my site 🙂
Beautiful..:)loved it!
Thank you Divsi 🙂
Nice mam. Is there any rule that it should be of five lines?
Ideally it should be 5 lines, with 1st and 2nd rhyming with 5th and 3rd rhyming with 4th. 🙂 Try it!
Happily ended… 🙂 nice limerick Shweta… 🙂
I have missed you my friend, but no excuses when its Durga Puja time 🙂 and yes happy ending. Many more to come.
How sweet! Will surely recall this when I want to end the fights… 😀
TC! Keep smiling 🙂
Well alls well that ends well, and this time around I can say its a happy ending!
Lovely poem, Shweta! 🙂 Loved it!
Thanks Vinitha, happy you loved it.
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Good one Sweta, I like the happy ones. 🙂
Thanks Indrani, trying hard for this genre.:)
Very nice and sweet.
Thank you Abhijitji.
Now I know what Limerick is 🙂
Nice one
Keep writing.
Thank you Anirudh, happy you liked it.
Hmmm… pen more of these stuffs 😛
Thanks am motivated to continue such work!
Arrey .. its great Ms Dave-MK-Sen 🙂 Just keep it up ..
I like all nick names Kokila 🙂 loads of Love and Hugs.
Lovely poem, Shweta 😀 for you.. this floers for you
Thank you Sriharsh, really happy you liked it 🙂