Unsatiated need
More you give feel lack of it
Idiosyncrasies mine
Can’t fathom love thine
***************************************************
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
Unsatiated need
More you give feel lack of it
Idiosyncrasies mine
Can’t fathom love thine
***************************************************
Very Beautifully expressed!!
thank you M.S 🙂
Irony of love….!
rightly said again Sunaina 🙂
lots of thoughts in mind after reading this poem, its an awesome one. general human psychology..depicted through beautiful words.
thank you Jyotirmoy, glad you liked it 🙂
Very deep observation Shweta!
Some people are so full of love,but they hardly get as much in return.
you really understood it exactly what I wanted to convey Induji 🙂
..kinda cute!
Or, wait a minute, it is in fact CUTE! Loved it:)
BTW, there’s a verse at your command here: https://amitaag.blogspot.in/2016/08/flight.html
Thank you Amitji, cute hehe cute it is 🙂 I am hopping now to check the post 🙂
Very beautiful and though provoking. Loved it Shweta
thank you Ami, very happy you liked it 🙂
nice
thank you Hem Lata 🙂
Nice one 🙂 !! Sounds strange but love does grow greedy
Aaaa nice, ek dam unndan ma , it made me think , prem no ehsaasej aavo che, prem ma har ek na anubhav ekj hoy che, pan varnan alag alag- kyarek sabdo ma toh kyarek maun ma – wahh maast, Manne gamiyu 🙂
Have a fantastic and joyful weekend ahead
Thanks and yes keep on those smiles 🙂
wah wah…tame toh comment ka kavita kari Bhavik….mane pan khoobj gamyu 🙂
Thought provoking..loved it !
thank you so much 🙂
The irony. Lovely lines 🙂
thank you Vaisakhi, glad you liked it 🙂
I love these words that ask for more love saying it out that it wouldn’t ever be enough because, well, how can love ever be enough? 🙂 Beautifully woven Ani befitting such a beautiful picture where hands entwine perfectly. Perfecto! One of the loveliest post that I would come back to again and again 🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank you for this morning smile, that I am smiling right now 🙂
This heart asks only one without a speck of thought….and isn’t it awesome that the loved on never tires to give back! I too come here often to see the picture and this comment 🙂 Love can never be enough murray 🙂
Ohh indeed love is always insatiable. The irony is put so beautifully. Loved it 🙂
thank you so much babe…happy you liked it 🙂