Sometimes it is difficult to decide but the leap of faith shows us light and what we were missing in life 🙂
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
Sometimes it is difficult to decide but the leap of faith shows us light and what we were missing in life 🙂
The last line on the worth of tears the lady got sold to touched my heart. wonderful composition.
thank you so much Pranju, happy you liked it 🙂
Every time in your poem i get at least one line that matches with my life,may be thats why i relate to your poems more deeply this time the two lines—“Bikharte zazbato ko….Chalti mei”, surprisingly am going through such feelings now-a-days.loved it a lot
hope you get out of the Dilemma soon Jyotirmoy, am glad you can relate to my poems, means a lot 🙂
Nice
thanks
bahut khoob
shukriya 🙂
गज़ब लिखा है श्वेता जी ! आखिरी पंक्तियां तो बहुत ही दमदार हैं !!
Shukriya Yogiji, aapne saraha bahut achha laga 🙂
Kya baat hai Shweta… waah wah!!!
thank you Sneh 🙂
Hey Shweta,
Visiting your blog after quite a while. And the first post I see is in Hindi. A big surprise 🙂
It is so beautifully written, with complicated emotions described in a few lines. Will come back for more soon.
–Nimi
http://www.NimiArora.com
thank you so much Nimi, am happy I kept the interest 🙂 glad you liked it 🙂
Beautiful lines, Shweta. Raw emotions are difficult to express but you’re a master in it.
jazbat main soch aa jaay toh milavati ho jaate hain isliye dil ki baat seedhe hi likh deti hoon main Ravish 🙂
Very beautiful poem. Heart touching and nicely written.
thank you Vikash, glad you liked it 🙂
Very touching poem dear… you got me in the last line. 🙂
thank you Arpita, long time no see, how have you been sweetie 🙂
Such true feelings can come from deeper self.
Rightly said Chaitali, heartfelt and penned 🙂
Loved the poem, Shweta! Aansuo ke bhav bik gayi mai… Heart touching lines!
thank you Rakesh, achhi lagi khushi hui 🙂
Awesome and heart touching composition.
thank you Arvind 🙂
Soulful expressions beautifully depicted!
thank you Maitreni, glad you liked it 🙂
The simple words beautifully crafted and the sense of loss, anguish, dejection and despair is palpable in this one.
you summed the poem up so so well Bushra, thank you 🙂
Nice lines
thank you Anupam 🙂
wonderful poem. and very touching. chronicle of a confused soul…beautifully expressed
thank you Jiggyasa, glad you liked it 🙂
Wonderful poem…..
thank you 🙂
beautiful poem………true “asamanjas me hi gujar jati hai jindgi, din gujare sal gujare, kabhi gujar jayenge hum”
wah wah Geetaji, bahut sundar panktiyan 🙂
Ufff what an expression. It touches the soul Shweta. God bless you.
thank you Jas, glad you liked it 🙂 and super welcome to my blog 🙂
Kya chot lagi hai mujhe yeh padh kar kya bataon…bahut khoob!
wah wah naye shayar sahab….kya farmaya hai…:)
Touching. Beautifully written 🙂
thank you Purba 🙂
So powerful writing! Brought memories and tears.
while I am happy it touched you but sad it got tears Moon 🙁
Wahhh touching .. Shweta there’s no words to express this, You really touch hearts of your readers,
Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead 🙂
thank you Bhavik, very happy you liked it 🙂
Wahhh touching.. Shweta there’s no words to express this,
Have a great weekend ahead 🙂
Amazing poem and wonderful lines….
thank you so much 🙂
Wonderful and touching poem. Beautiful !
thank you Ashween 🙂
I simply Loved it..
again a masterpiece
Wah… kya bat hai… bahut hi sundar rachna… 🙂
Few things which we can’t express has been beautifully expressed in this poem. Great creation indeed… 🙂
Shukriya Ashish, happy to have you back 🙂
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