An innovative concept brought in by my blogger friend Ravish where he challenged us few bloggers to write on a audio prompt. This is the second prompt of the challenge.
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When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
wow shweta u literally give words to human emotions .the feeling & expression of love is described brilliantly and beautifully.. secondly I would like to compliment Ravishji on creating this serene clip and on which Shweta ur creativity is – “Masha Allah”
Beautiful – simply superb 🙂
Thank you so so much Bhavik for liking it…really happy you found it beautiful 🙂
Beautifully penned. Liked it a lot 🙂
Thank you Aniruddha 🙂
Wow Shweta, this seems mesmerizing… so beautifully penned down and kudos to Ravish for bringing it up for you to do it… Lovely indeed and I’m gonna ask my Mom as well to come & give it a read, I’m sure she’d love it too <3 Hugs!
Thank you Maitreni, I would be very happy to get Sangeeta’s thoughts on this too 🙂 Ravish has indeed given us a gem of a track 🙂
A honeyed expression and so lyrical!
Thank you Uppalji 🙂
Fluidity of the stream and spontaneity of the cloud in your lovely verse, Shweta:)
Shukriya Amitji 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
first of all I must say that this prompt is so beautiful … I was mesmerized by it and then you have done wonders to its beauty dear .. Loved it bestie 🙂
So agree bestie…I wanted this track to never stop and was delighted to know that Ravish assembled it himself! Thank you so so much for loving it muahh 🙂
Beautiful, mesmerizing.Am really running short of words for praise Shweta.
Thank you so much Somali ….super happy you liked it 🙂
बहुत बहुत शानदार शब्द श्वेता जी ! हिंदी कविता में भी आप श्रेष्ठ हैं ! सुन्दर सृजन
Shukriya Yogiji, bohot bohot shukriya 🙂
श्वेता, इस कविता रचना ने दिल को छू लिया. बादल और झरने के रिश्ते का इतना सुंदर वर्णन. वाह! प्रकृति प्रमियों के लिए आपकी तरफ से यह बहुत सुंदर उपहार है! अनेकों धन्यवाद इस अती सुंदर कृति के लिए!
आपकी कलम में जादू है! 🙂
Shukriya Vishal….my heart is filled with so much happiness to see that you liked the poem so much. When human beings love it could be conditional or some other emotions mixed with love….but nature has no conditions…its love in its purest form giving and unconditional.
heart touching poem… apki ye kavita mantra-mugdha karne layak hai… atyant hi sundar rachna… shabdon ka aisa uttam aur anupam upyog kabhi kabhi hi dekhne ko milta hai…
You have the power to create beautiful words and with the help of that you create beautiful and an everlasting creation as you have done in this epic poem… There are few works which creates an everlasting impact on readers memory which remains forever… and your this poem belongs to that category…
Compliments from a poet are like wow….thank you so so much Ashish 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
Beautifully composed, bestie…. I’m really overwhelmed by the lyrical aspect of it..one of your best creations… 🙂
Thank you bestie, if you say one of my best then it surely must be…and motivated to do better hugs 🙂
Very beautiful verse Shweta. The flow of your words very well compliments the fluidity of the stream and adds definition and harmony to the sound clip. Indeed beautiful selection of words. Your poem touches the zenith of romantic poetry. Kudos. 🙂
Am so happy and touched firstly a warm welcome to my blog Sangeeta and secondly this appreciation coming from an amazing poetess as yourself means so much to me. Thank you so so much for liking it 🙂
Beautiful….both the prompt and the response
Thank you Lata, glad you liked it 🙂
Wow! Such a beautiful take on the prompt. Loved how you’ve made it so lyrical. 🙂
Thank you Deeshani, happy happy you liked it 🙂
Oh my God! Shweta, this poem is so mesmerizing and romantic that I can’t explain it in words. The way you observed the elements of Nature and beautified them with your thoughts is beyond amazing. Loved your thought process. This was one of the best poems I have read in a long long time. Thank you so much for writing this. Hugs for such a marvelous creation.
Every time I read your comment I am all smiles…that’s the love you spread Purba. Thank you so much for liking it so much. It is a big compliment to hear that it moved you after a long time 🙂 Hug to you too babe 🙂
Shweta, it really needs courage
to comment on a legendary piece like this. You have taken love to another level.
It’s indeed a soulful composition. It has the potentiality to transport a human
being from ordinary plane to higher levels, if meditate on it heartedly. I
truly agree with Maniparna. It’s your one of the Best. 🙂
The magic of your prompt, the amazing assembling of soulful music has got this creation Ravish. I loved the music composition so much that I did not want it to stop. simply splendid and kudos to you my friend. Now to the poem, well thank you so so much that I could match up to the music 🙂 Love is the epitome its me may be who rose to another step to feel the emotion 🙂 I am liking the concept a lot….keep them coming 🙂
very beautiful poetry!
Thank you so much 🙂
Very Beautiful Poem!
Thanks M.S. 🙂
बहुत सुंदर श्वेता:)
Shukriya Rahul 🙂
This is beautiful beyond words. Mazza aa gaya padh kar!
wah thank you Basanti…I would love to call you by this name 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
प्रशंसनीय
Shukriya Rakesh 🙂
Hey hi there Shweta! I have recently started discovering absolutely stunning poets as yourself, and I’m truly loving the experience of reading beautiful Hindi poetry..keep it going girl!
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Thank you so much Leena, happy you liked it 🙂