मुतज़ाद
ख्वाइशों की बिजलियाँ
गरजी बिस्तर पे
तन्हाइयों का शोर कातिलाना रहा
मौसम बदले
साथ करवटें भी
इस प्यास को बुझाने का सलीक़ा न मिला
अर्श – ए – ज़िम उम्मीद छोड़
ताब रखा कमज़ोर सिकुड़ती तपिश पे
ताक़त रुबा , ताज़ा – ए – शिरीन , नाब वही एक सहारा निकला
मुतज़ाद – Opposites, सलीक़ा – proper way, अर्श – ए – ज़िम – highest (seventh) sky, ताब – patience, ताक़त रुबा – that which saps/drains the strength, ताज़ा – ए – शिरीन – fresh and sweet, नाब – unadulterated
An innovative concept brought in by my blogger friend Ravish where he challenged us few bloggers to write on a audio prompt. Tried my hand at the challenge 🙂
Image source: Giphy
hehe…. Liked the last line most. Beautiful creation on the prompt. Lovely blending of romance, humour & irony. 🙂
Good job, Shweta (Y)
Thanks Ravish….happy I did some justice to your audio prompt 🙂 It is an interesting concept 🙂
Loved the lines….thats an innovative concept…The last line is the zenith had to read and read the poem again to get the pleasure of reaching the last line.
Now my day is made….i am smiling ok ok grinning at your appreciation 🙂 thanks Datta 🙂
Wah wah Wah firstly, let me compliment on the brilliant concept and then to u on prompt creation, U are truly a versatile writer, or i should say singer or guitarist
Beautiful lines with appropriate picture
Liked it very much 🙂
Have a beautiful day ahead
Shukriya Bhavik, your liking motivates me to do better 🙂 super happy you liked it sweet friend 🙂
behad badhiya …. !!!!!!!! :D:)
Shukriya bestie 🙂
Kya khoob! What brilliant use of language in poetry! Aisi urdu pe toh koi bhi fida ho jaye. 🙂
wah wah aur aisi taarif pe toh hum bilkul jaan nisaar ho jaayen 🙂 shukriya Somali 🙂
Looove the fire works Shweta and the bonfire:) Aati sundar.
Thanks Vishal 🙂 happy you liked it 🙂
It’s like velvet – soft and beautiful. Loved reading it.
बहुत सुन्दर शब्द !!
I loved the image!!!Shweta… Hindi is a bit tough to understand for me, especially tough words…to be honest I couldn’t understand the meaning properly of your post apart from the meaning of some words. I think as the image is so captivating…it should be an amazing write up as well. 🙂
behad khoob… 🙂
Bahut badiya. 🙂
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atyant sundar prastuti… 🙂
soch ki andaaz-e-bayaan aur shabdo ki sajawat padh ke baas yehi awaaz nikla —Wah Wah, Wah Wah/