A woman narrates the time when her beloved was away. My sincere apologies to my friends Teny and Vinay with a promise for an English version next time 🙂
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Hii Shweta
wonderful poem –
Loneliness described in an optimistic approach
Very beautiful, Dear. I like the different moods of love. Without hunger, there’s no enjoyment of satiation. Longing gives a different height to unison. Deeper the root, higher the tree. 🙂
The beauty of the poem isn’t confined to the seamless n lucid depiction of emotions but goes far beyond. It tells about the love that resides in everything around, the one that’s being felt, breathed ad lived. Both in the absence and the presence. And that’s the power it is conveying 🙂 Astounding Ananya.. hats off 🙂
Naaiceyy :).. He he thank you Shweta, I really love poetry, I can understand the oral communication but have a bit of difficulty when it comes to written Hindi..
Well Shweta, It touched my heart…more so as I am living without my love these days….The only difference it was my call of duty that took me away…but yes…loved your poetry to bits
Hii Shweta
wonderful poem –
Loneliness described in an optimistic approach
Yes absolutely Bhavik, super happy you liked it 🙂
Very beautiful, Dear. I like the different moods of love. Without hunger, there’s no enjoyment of satiation. Longing gives a different height to unison. Deeper the root, higher the tree. 🙂
SO so rightly said Ravish, you gave a new meaning to the theme of the poem, thank you so much for this interpretation 🙂
The beauty of the poem isn’t confined to the seamless n lucid depiction of emotions but goes far beyond. It tells about the love that resides in everything around, the one that’s being felt, breathed ad lived. Both in the absence and the presence. And that’s the power it is conveying 🙂 Astounding Ananya.. hats off 🙂
Thank you Shashank, kya chahiye tumhe….itni taarif 😉 well j, I know what you mean and thank you for feeling the emotions conveyed in the poem. 🙂
Naaiceyy :).. He he thank you Shweta, I really love poetry, I can understand the oral communication but have a bit of difficulty when it comes to written Hindi..
I would like to write an English translation but it kind of changes the meaning, am happy you could get some meaning of it and liked it 🙂
Very beautiful indeed 🙂
Thank you Anoop 🙂
Well Shweta, It touched my heart…more so as I am living without my love these days….The only difference it was my call of duty that took me away…but yes…loved your poetry to bits
Awwww…I pray you work gets done very well and you meet him soon…can imagine you missing him so much 🙂 Thank you for liking the poem 🙂
So beautifully composed Shweta, it touched my heart to the core :’) Hats off!
Thank you Maitreni, am very happy you liked it 🙂
I told you in the last post too…your hindi expressions are amazing. Once again, i stand by my words!
Oh my my thank you so much Alok for liking my Hindi poems 🙂
Behad khooob, Shweta. 🙂
Bohot shukriya Saru 🙂
Khoobsurat … tumhari tarah ..:)
Shukriya Bestie 🙂
Beautiful written poetry – straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Tushar for liking it 🙂
kya baat hai… behad sundar rachna…
Shukriya Ashish, happy you liked it 🙂