A Poem on something that never leave us, Thoughts. Happy, sad, nostalgic, romantic, worrisome…that is when the heart tells the mind, wither away o thoughts like Autumn leaves.
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
A Poem on something that never leave us, Thoughts. Happy, sad, nostalgic, romantic, worrisome…that is when the heart tells the mind, wither away o thoughts like Autumn leaves.
It reminds me of Emily when she says,
“Heart, we will forget him!
You an I, tonight!
You may forget the warmth he gave,
I will forget the light.
When you have done, pray tell me
That I my thoughts may dim;
Haste! lest while you’re lagging.
I may remember him!”
~Emily Dickinson
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Thank you Anshul, if it reminds you of a great poet as her, i take this as a huge compliment.
Beautiful! Thoughts could be empowering, or completely disabling. And for the ones that give nothing but pain…. wither away is good advice.
wow, such a nice take on my words, thank you Ami 🙂
Simply beautiful Shweta. Both the poem and presentation.
Collection of very Nice words in simple way
Thank you Yogi ji 🙂
Thanks Saru, coming from a poetess whose words resonate beauty, I feel amazing 🙂
Beautiful… Nice.. 🙂
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Nice…
Thank you Alok 🙂
Wow..this is beautiful ..and the pic complements it perfectly.
Thanks Somali, happy you liked the words and the picture 🙂
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Awesome Shweta… loved the words and the picture 🙂
Thanks babe, happy you liked it 🙂
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Collection is very Beautiful :)……
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Beautiful. Loved the poem 🙂
Thank you Purba, happy you liked it 🙂
Lovely…I could visualize the withering away of the memories along with the autumn leaves!
if words trigger imagination, my poem met its purpose 🙂 thank you Sunita.
I wish it was that easy for thoughts to wither away ………lovely words though !!
Thank you Sweta…so agree !!
Beautiful narration of human emotions emerged straight from the heart. You write so well Shweta that I imagined myself into all these lines. It seems like all these lines carrying the same events of life happening around. Probably this is what the establish the connection between poet’s words & readers realization.
BTW nice font style though 🙂
Wow….sweetest words Vishal. Super happy you liked them 🙂 You are the first one to notice the font change, thank you truly feel content on this creation. 🙂
good
Thank you Aroraji 🙂
Loved the rhythmic roll .. to comment about the emo is to be repetitive ! I felt an urge in the words as you ask the thoughts to wither… loved that ‘feel ‘.. what ain’t yours wouldn’t stay ….. 🙂
Thanks babe, couldn’t have asked for more 🙂 hugs and kisses 🙂
WOW ! Love ur writing style
Thanks babe.
The first paragraph just blew me away! Such a beautiful expression using words. Lovely Shweta! Lovely!
Thank you so so much 🙂
Very sensitively written Shweta, way to go!
Thank you Sunaina, glad you liked it 🙂
Lovely poem with rhythmic words dear… 🙂
Thanks Arpita, means a lot 🙂
Very nice
Thank you Abhimanyu 🙂
Beautiful Poem 🙂
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Awesome piece of writing. Feeling privileged to get a chance to read such a great work.
This was a masterpiece I must say. I am happy to have stumbled upon this post 🙂 Superb!
Thank you Anoop, happy you liked it 🙂