A sensuous poem in English and Hindi.
And the Hindi version of it, version because I have not translated but written on the same theme.
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
A sensuous poem in English and Hindi.
And the Hindi version of it, version because I have not translated but written on the same theme.
Loved the theme of poems. The background indeed helped in feeling
the vividness of emotions from earthly love to divine unison. Both English &
Hindi versions beautifully conveyed the nuances. I just got lost in the flow.
It refreshed my mood. A very delightful read. Heartiest gratitude for this,
Shweta 🙂
Thank you Ravish, am really happy you liked them. You noticed the background, that’s so wonderful 🙂 Sensuality encompasses so many emotions in it that one can do some justice to a poem with the theme. I believe this is one theme where few words can provide a personalized feeling to the reader. You did not allow me to provide your name under credits but I thank you for all the Hindi spell checks on the poem, it is better because of you 🙂
poetry indeed. Love the flow of emotions and words Shweta 🙂
Thanks you Vinay, happy you liked it.
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What to say about it – how a poet can interpret a theme/thoughts into flow of words – is simply outstanding to read. Both versions (eng/hindi) equally effective to readers. Appreciate the skills. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
Thank you Vishal, you made my day with such sweet words.
Simply BEAUTIFUL!
Thank you Moon.
Sensual indeed.
There’s a lot of life in these lines. Nice job.
Thanks Dee for liking it 🙂
Absolutely beautiful Shweta!
Thank you Sunaina 🙂
It is super.
deeply emotional and sensual too.
Thank you 🙂
Very beautifully written….loved both Hindi and English version
Thank you Anita that you liked both versions.
Romanticism at its best … 🙂
Thanks babe, I always look forward to your comment esply on poems 🙂 Happy you liked it.
emotional, sensual, n quite seductive too…! i m speechless…beyond words…!
Thanks VP for the sweet words 🙂
Really enjoyed the poem. Very innocent and true perspective.
Thank you so much.
GREAT! THE GRAPHIC EXPRESSION OF ROMANCE AND SENSUALITY!
Thank you Uppalji 🙂
Really enjoyed the poem. Very innocent and true perspective.
Thank you Yogiji.
Sensual indeed 🙂
Great that you have English & Hindi versions, Soul-sis 🙂
Yes Soul-sis, I originally wrote it in Hindi but felt a large group of readers would not connect so the English version 🙂
Wow that was quite nice!
Thanks Anki 🙂
Loved it ! especially the Hindi version 🙂
Thank you Renu, glad you liked it.
Lovely compositions and your command over both the languages is superb! सुंदर लेखन:)
Thank you Rahul 🙂
Well depicted dear girl ! Loved the creased satin sheet Shweta ..made the lines vivid 🙂 Though your words have already created the perfect unison … loved both hindi and english .. Way to go 🙂
Thanks babe….am so happy you liked it 🙂
Wooow…….. Excellent dear!!! Simply loved it!
Thank you Bhavani 🙂
Poetic monument to
romantic moments .jk
Thank you JK 🙂
Oh la la… Loved it! Both the versions!
A lovely poetess’s appreciation means a lot 🙂
Wonderfully expressed!! Both!!
Thank you Deepak ji. Khushi jhaalli tumka aavadla madhoon 🙂
Tumhi konkani ullayatati?
vaay maka ullaunchaak yeta baraunchaak yaana 🙂
Barey dislay aaikunu 🙂
Oh No , This is amazing , both versions , This is something excellent , This is pure command over flow of words in both the versions !!
Thanks Rahul, happy you liked it 🙂
Excellent work…Your command over the language and handling of words is commendable..Respect..!! 🙂
Thank you, for such sweet words and appreciation.
A fluid sensuality in the poem, Shweta! A lovely read!
Thank you Ilakshee
Hi Shweta, for the wonderful blog and very inspiring work you do, I have nominated you for the Very Inspiring Blogger Award. Keep blogging, keep inspiring. http://wanderingjatin.wordpress.com/2014/12/21/inspiring-blogger-award/
Thank you so much Jatin, I was on holiday, am back and will accept this award first post of 2015.
nice one Shweta.. I loved it 🙂
Thank you Vartika, happy you liked it
So beautiful and softly handled 🙂
Thank you Puru.
Beautifully written!
Thank you Bikash 🙂
Jism ki baat nahi thi dil tak jaana thathat.
Bhauat khoob shweta ji
Amazing…simply too good! Keep it up! 🙂
Thanks Amrita 🙂
very soft spoken wild night!
passionate… tantalizing… hats-off to your love for words… magical.
very realistic…awesome illustration
Good one. I liked specially the part He kissed me to check …
This is sensuous … love the passion in this piece 🙂
Loved the both the versions. Scintillating and sensuous.
OMG this is so artistic n beautiful ..
Ananya Fashions and More
hindi version is much more oomph-ish
Nice poem and nice write. I fully enjoyed this one.
lovely!