I have heard a many chatter
Seen each character
Some in loneliness desolve
Couples trying hard to resolve
Then there are those who always laugh out loud
And the women glamorous fake a pout
Couples whisper over me sweet nothings
Hours spent by some over writings and readings
A harem of women come to gossip
Not watching the words as they sip
Of all my favorite is a couple old
Abundance shared but words few told
They sit across holding hands trembling
Smiling and loving the life’s rambling
I hear all pretty close up
It all happens over me, a coffee cup!
This is for my bestie Hiri, she messaged me yesterday asking me to write on a coffee cup! For you my babe!
Image source: Shweta Dave (Feels nice not going to Google images for once :))
Muah! U r simply awesome!!!
All for you….All for you….:) Radha zara khul ke has ke batao…miss ya crazy. Love you!!
Hello Shweta great lines,in our life most part we feel loneliness and i think this is a great coffee for you friend…
Regards
Cyril
Thanks Cyril, glad you liked them.
Thanks Shweta and Hiri for this Coffee Cup. It reminds me of the beautiful memories I had over coffee with someone special….”women glamorous fake a pout” 😉 😀 ‘The old man holding a trembling hand’ reminds me of The Notebook coffee shop description. Great job Shweta (Y)
Thanks Ravish. Hiri did pull me out of the serious stuff I was continuously posting without a smile, you know what I mean. Plan to keep this momentum on 🙂
awesome! How nicely expressed 🙂
Thank you Divsi, happy happy you liked it 🙂
A lot can happen over coffee, eh.
That was a colourful picture you painted there. 🙂 Nice.
Absolutely D Nambiar 🙂 Thanks you for your appreciation 🙂
Reminded me of that Cafe Coffee Day byline – A lot can happen our coffee. Lovely post Shweta 🙂
Thanks Renu, your appreciations makes me want better of me 🙂
Simply awesome…took me down memory lane of my life…The way you have penned the lines I guess many people will relate to it…Rock On!!!
Thanks Vijay, am glad you related to it…happy you dropped by.
Aww thats a beautiful cup of coffee and poetry ensconced together 🙂
Thank you Ekta, I had clicked this when I was sitting at a coffee shop in Paris reading the book. Nothing like travelling alone with coffee and a book 🙂
Awesome cuppa coffee…….!!!
Truly Bhavani, happy you liked it.
You brought back my sweetest memories I had with my special one. Sounds lovely Shweta. Superb!
Purpose reached Gowtham if I got you nostalgic of sweet memories. Thank you!
World Coffee Day was on Sept 29th, Soul-sis.
What lovely words to celebrate friendship & love for coffee 🙂
Great pic. Yes, let us use our camera’s images!
Hey Soul-sis, wow that was well timed then with the world coffee day!! We got to have a long coffee chat when I am in BBSR next 🙂 You are the one who picked the line on using my own pic, no doubt you are my soul sis 🙂
You captured all the moments over a coffee cup brilliantly, Shweta.. 🙂
Thanks Vinitha, happy you liked it.
Love the post Shweta and glad to see that coffee can be so meaningful for you both!
So right Sunaina, I remember the last time I was in India and met her, we met at 10 am for a coffee and then hopped for lunch and then again a coffee in the evening and just chatted so much 🙂 Thank you so much for your appreciation.
Wow that was an awesome poem, great use of words, I wish I could write as fluent as you do.
Of course you can, just give it a try Vikram am sure it will be awesome.
No wonder coffee day calls it – anything can happen over a cup of coffee.. Beautiful poem Shweta :).. It captures almost all the emotions I have gone through at a coffee shop 🙂
Am so happy you related to the emotions in the poem. Thank you Vinay.
A FEW LINES WERE REALLY MUSICAL! WELL COMPOSED IMAGE EXUDING WARMTH OF ABANDON!
Thank you Uppalji.
Such a lovely poem. <3
Thanks Saru 🙂
Very nice. Very well said.
Thank you Abhijit.
well imagined and written
Thank you Aroraji.
Very nice word!!
It is like “har shaks muze muskurata hua dikhta hai, andar se lapta kyun lagta hai, har shaks muze badla badla sa kyun lagta hai”
Bohot khoob, shukriya.
Friends and coffee, awesome conmbination! 😀
Blasphemous Aesthete
Thank you Anshul.
This captures it. It’s precise and could be pictured as something around. Strong simple writing!
Madame, superb you are.
Thank you 🙂
sweet
Thank you!
Thanks Hiri for suggesting Shweta this and thanks Shweta for writing dear. What a fine example of Life Poetry. Creating things out of eveyday’s colloquial instances.
Thank you so much Datta 🙂 Hiri is gonna be on cloud nine after reading this!
Such an apt poem on the atmosphere of a cafe! Thoroughly enjoyed it!
Thank you Mridula, happy you liked it 🙂
Beautiful Lines…….. Chatter is always a part of women’s life and a cup of coffee plays a great role..
wooow it’s awesome
Absolutely agree Kirti, happy you liked it 🙂
Awesome poem Shweta! Just love it! Recently came to know about a new Kannada movie ‘Parapancha’ based on similar weaving of stories of various people at a bar… After virtually visualized the movie through your poem, eagerly waiting to watch the movie…
TC! Keep smiling dear 🙂
Wow Sindhu, am thrilled you are liking my work so much. It truly makes me write more and motivates me to write better. Thank you so much 🙂
“Of all my favorite is a couple old
Abundance shared but words few told”——-> so profound…. couldn’t stop digging the poem 🙂
Thank you Anunoy 🙂
Great poem..keep it up
Thanks Pamela
Its a beautiful poem Shweta and Thanks to Hiri ,to bring it out of you…….. I loved all people specially the harem of ladies and the old couple ….. Kudos dearie ..It reminded me of a very poignant and beautiful poem “Patliputra ki Ganga ” where Ganga is the speaker telling about the rise n fall of Patliputra … different in intensity but the style is sae..
Lovely take girl friend 🙂 <3
You know babe, I love the references you give of Hindi poetry. In fact I still remember the kavita book you had shared on your site 🙂 I wish i would have read these in my school days, i was busy learning Marathi lol 🙂 and now well you don’t say thank you to best friends so I would say with all rights always be there with me 🙂
I know one thing i am going to do when i meet you next babe, I want to take down the names of all the beautiful work in Hindi that you have read and liked. I have so much to know still 🙂 Now if you re read the poem, can you not feel the same when we met over coffee 🙂
Wo bhi ! Wo bhi ! I am kicking myself for not remembering it :/
😀
Hey Shweta, thanks for getting me here! This is such a beautiful poem and I could totally relate with it – ditto ditto for Anjali and me… with her I can be me! leaving links of my pics with Anjali as a reply to your comment on my post! Do have a dekho 😉 hugs my girl 🙂