A woman who wants to give it all in love, if destiny demands and Lord commands. A romantic ghazal for women to express their love to that one who matters.
When I lyrically recite stories
When I lyrically recite stories
A woman who wants to give it all in love, if destiny demands and Lord commands. A romantic ghazal for women to express their love to that one who matters.
Wish I know the language to understand your lines.. I’m sure it has its own beauty 🙂 keep writing!
Aww…I many a time think of translating but it would lose its charm 🙁
Beautifully woven Ananya. Well, only you could capture immense and immeasurable love through your words. Simplicity, pure, and just love. Love it! Each line is powerful but I just couldn’t sway my eyes off the 3rd stanza. Lovely!
Thank you Shashank, love is such a feeling that the words just flow.
wahhhhh…. aaffreen…. aaffreen… its wonderful .. kya kahe aapki tareef main ..shabd nahi milte, aap jaise dost baar baar nahi milte..
wonderfully written 🙂
Enjoy ur evening 🙂
You shouldn’t get a friend like me…I am one of a kind lolz…happy you liked it Bhavik 🙂
atyant hi sundar rachna…
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Shukriya Ashish, happy you liked it 🙂 Ill take up the challenge 🙂 will post soon!
Shweta where did you learn to blend hindi so well with urdu? Its beautiful. This is the kind of language one would hear in shayari of the 50s & 60s.. graceful and poised.
I learnt it from my God, Jagjit Singhji, his ghazals he would sing in a combination of hindi and urdu and also give meanings for more people to understand. Pure Urdu may not be understood by most readers 🙂 Thank you for liking it 🙂
Okay got it now. 🙂
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Lovely Poem!
Thank you Madhusudan 🙂
Beautiful poem Shweta 🙂
Shukriya Anjali 🙂
beautifully crafted Romantic composition..could feel the passion oozing out of each word..Hats Off!!
Thank you so much Roma, it is rare that you find a woman describing her passion for her man, so the idea was solely to make a man feel value, obsessed and loved.
Beautiful poem 🙂
Such poised expressions dear…. The passion could be sensed from every lines… Loved it to the core…A rendezvous with ultimate romance <3
last couplet was icing on the cake,
isi tarah gar likhte rahe tum to,
aur kisi ko padhne ki phir talab na ho,
omg….itni tareef….shukriya shukriya cifar 🙂 motivates me to write better 🙂
Bahut khoob, Shweta 🙂
Shukriya Amitji 🙂
Kya baat hai. Each couplet takes the feeling to another level.
coming from a kaviyitri herself….makes it more valuable 🙂
Lovely touching words, Soul-sis 🙂
Thank you Soul-sis 🙂
awww…. beautifully penned dear…
The Orange Fever
Thank you babe!
So beautiful! Words that touch the soul 🙂
Thank you Purba, happy you liked it 🙂
बहुत सुन्दर शब्द
Shukriya Yogiji 🙂
very nice poem shweta,
यदि आपको बुरा न लगे तो आपको बताना चाहूंगी, बंध की जगह बंद लिखिए
bilkul hemlata, shukriya ki aapne yeh sujhaya, I will change it asap 🙂
There is a passion and that is of body and there is another passion that stays in soul…your lines were so piercing that it touched that passion that eternal flame in my soul….
Wow….thank you so much for liking it so much 🙂
The last one says it all… It’s full on sentiment.. Flowing ……:) 🙂
Thank you Bestie 🙂
Very touching and profound. emotions flowing through. Awesome babes. Loved it to bits 🙂
Thank you so much Dipanwita 🙂 So after this may I join you for the next trekking trip 🙂
Deep sentiments from a passionate lover…
While reading your poem, I just thought of these lines.. “ऐसी लागी लगान मीरा हो गयी मगन….”
It is a great compliment to be compared to the selfless love of Meera 🙂 Thank you Vishal 🙂
Such beautifully woven words..loved it !
Thank you Renu 🙂
lovely
Thank you Sweta 🙂
Beautifully penned.. loved it 🙂
Thanks Deeshani 🙂
Great feelings.
Thank you Darshith and welcome to my blog.
And how i prayed you to be mine…Rekindled old times when i requested my oblivion lover to be mine and be within me while I become his breath
I think, its never ending word!! I loved it and thanks for share!!
So pure, so true…